Effect of technology

Nowadays society's technical development , it urges the civilized the progress and technical developed , but relative has also brought many disasters .

For example : the air pollution . The carbon dioxide increase has created thegreenhouse effect , this will have the suitable injury to the futureenvironment .The flood eruption, follows many person of casualties But thesenature counter-attacking, could not escape the relations with our cashscience and technology .

Although the science and technology has brought many injuries , but also has brought many conveniences .

The present most need the work is starts from the present to recover the nature .

Focus & Meaning STUDENT17, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 2 for focus. Focus relates to your ability to present a consistent, unified message and stay on topic. Your focus is minimal. Typically, a response at this level demonstrates a limited understanding of the purpose and audience, but that may not be totally clear and/or may lack a continued focus on the main idea throughout the essay. STUDENT17,您文章內的主題不完整或遺漏了，這表示您並未說明您是贊成或反對這個題目。一旦您表示出贊成或反對，您至少需要三個理由來支持您的想法。 STUDENT17,下列是一些幫助您改進文章這個部分的建議：
讀者： 您需要知道閱讀此文章的讀者是誰。您可以假裝寫信給在題目中提出意見的人，舉例來說，假如題目的開頭是 your school board has decided to，這封信就可以是寫給Dear School Board的。
目的： STUDENT17,說明您對該文章主題的看法(您是贊成或反對文章題目中所表達出的看法)。 a. 使用Persuasive Topic Sentence Outline，根據文章主題，在標示意見的那幾行寫下您的意見。您在這裡寫下的部分會當做此議論文文章的第一段。 b. 在說明您的立場後，一定要提供理由說明您的看法，至少要提供三個理由。這些理由將在您寫文章的其餘部分的時候會用到。
任務： 再看一次題目指派給您的任務，您是否完成了全部任務？